Talking in Songs...the Song
- Jeff Jackson
- Sep 2, 2022
- 2 min read
Talking in Songs
© 2019 Jeff Jackson
It was a sleepy Sunday afternoon
And the sun was sliding down the sky
And my true love and I were sitting on the back porch
sipping tea and listening to geese flying by
She pulled out her favorite book and began to read
And I pulled out my guitar because I felt the need
To write a song about all the feelings I had pent up inside
I started playing these same chords
At this same speed and spoke these same words
Which I was hoping expressed how deeply I was in love with her
But when I looked up and saw her green eyes,
I expected to see her bright shining smile,
But instead she looked serious
With something to say
She took a deep breath and I took a deep sigh
And before I could muster the words to ask why
It was in that pregnant pause,
I knew something was wrong:
She hates talking in songs
She doesn’t know what’s so wrong
With singing and hand claps
Or whistling and finger snaps
She hates talking in songs
And she simply can’t stand
When the singer demands
To speak the spoken word
Instead of singing what she prefers
She hates talking in songs.
She began to go off on the kinds of tunes
Where there was a catchy chorus,
but then was interrupted
By narrative text that took you
Out of the song
She said it felt manipulative
Like when a preacher is closing out his sermon
And the piano player begins to noodle over his words,
Which always leads to an altar call.
She’d rather hear harmonies and perfectly placed rhymes
A baritone or tenor crooning a tune That was both poignant
And pleasing to the ear
Instead of a clog of words uttered in the middle of a song
That have no meter or tempo
She said it was annoying
And I needed to stop








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